My favorite ones out of these are for sure the red panda, the cranes, and the flamingos! The red panda really captures the animal itself and has that personality they do! The flamingos I really like because of the linework, the essence was shown super well in those! The crane, especially the one with it's wings out, it one of my favorites because you get the depth of the wings, and the shape and all the anatomy looks pretty good on it! Something to work on would maybe be the elephants on the last page. The front view especially gets a little bit confusing in there, but overall, these are all really nice! :)
Your linework is superb, its so clean and consistent on every page! I really like the bird with its wings outstretched, its such a strong pose. If I had to point out one thing, it would be that a lot of the feathers on the first page being drawn in outline as s-shapes can sometimes take away from the overall sillhouette of the pose, but you seem to have figured that out by the last page. overall, great work!
My favorite ones out of these are for sure the red panda, the cranes, and the flamingos! The red panda really captures the animal itself and has that personality they do! The flamingos I really like because of the linework, the essence was shown super well in those! The crane, especially the one with it's wings out, it one of my favorites because you get the depth of the wings, and the shape and all the anatomy looks pretty good on it! Something to work on would maybe be the elephants on the last page. The front view especially gets a little bit confusing in there, but overall, these are all really nice! :)
ReplyDeleteYour linework is superb, its so clean and consistent on every page! I really like the bird with its wings outstretched, its such a strong pose. If I had to point out one thing, it would be that a lot of the feathers on the first page being drawn in outline as s-shapes can sometimes take away from the overall sillhouette of the pose, but you seem to have figured that out by the last page. overall, great work!
ReplyDeleteyour drawing are sp simplistic but yet easily read.. I like them a lot.
ReplyDeleteyour drawing are sp simplistic but yet easily read.. I like them a lot.
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